Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Feedback for my Story Please?

I am looking for anyone who can read and give me feed back. Let me know what you think, what I can correct and if there are parts that need more clarification.  I thank you in advance.

The Shadow Realm Chronicles: Maeve




The Marks' family is cursed. Cursed and living a life controlled by the shadows and It all began with Maeve. Poor sweet innocent Maeve was transformed from a loving mother into a creature of the night. The Shadow King has been playing with her and her family. Does he love her or is Maeve just another pawn in his schemes. Will her family fight for her or leave her? Will she fight to get back to them or succumb to the shadows?

Sunday, June 17, 2018

Rain




Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop
As you walk the puddles splash up getting your pants wet
Despite this, the sounds are smoothing
Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop

Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop
The cold sinking into your clothes as
It sends shivers down your spine
Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop

Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop
Your lips turned blue, the rain thickens
now running down your forehead and into your eyes.
You blink as you wipe your eyes
Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop

Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop
As you return home, the warmth hits you.
A blanket wraps around you as you sit and listen
To the tap tap of the rain on the roof.

Tap Tap, splash, splash, plop, plop

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Saturday, June 16, 2018

Trust No One



This is a poem about losing a friend. Sometimes we grieve a friend we lost but sometimes we grieve the friendship that was never there. It makes it difficult for us to open up again but we need to be open. If we are not, then we lose the chance of making a real friend. 

No one to trust
Nowhere to go

I roam the streets looking
For help, for trust, for someone
To believe me and take me in

My heart is empty and hurt
From the pain of losing you
Losing what I thought was
Trust, hope and a friend

Naïve and stupid, now I trust no one
Are they all lies?

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Sunday, June 10, 2018

Jersey Shore and Happy Birthday Orion!

I took the weekend off from writing and updating! From Girl Scouts at Wildwood to My baby’s birthday at Ocean City! Mommy is sore and tired. I am getting old, water slides are no longer my friend. Ah the things we do for our kids!



















Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Tuesday, June 5, 2018

Girl Scout Cookies

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